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Post by theblackguardian on Oct 9, 2010 6:40:23 GMT -5
Character's Name: Blackshadow Character's Age: 15 moons Gender: male Alliance: loner Position: loner Breed and Species: Geoffroy's cat Appearance: a normal Geoffroy's cat with jet black paws and Striking Emerald green eyes. Blackshadow has larger spots than a normal Geoffroy's cat and is quite tall for one too. He has a thin scar along his front left paw from when he was attacked by a group of loners. He has large ears and a small button nose. Personality: Blackshadow is a mature cat for his age since he has basically gone his whole life by himself. He is a little quieter than usual cats and has a brave strong will. he is always the first to go in against danger. But when it comes to kits he is a friendly fun cat who likes to play. History: His mother was a siberean cat and his father was a menalestic Geoffery's cat. His parent's were drowned In a flood at the twoleg place. He then wandered the Twoleg place, searching for a home. He ran into a group of loners, who ganged up on him. Roleplay Sample: The hawk had spotted a mouse on the lower moors with his magnified sight. He had gone into a dive bomb and soon had the small mouse in his crunching beak. He snuffled the last of the mouses tail into his throat and heard a tremendous screech. Before he knew it something sharp had hit him in the back, and as he threw it off his back he realised, it was a cat! Comments/other?: no
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Post by Fluff on Oct 9, 2010 11:07:20 GMT -5
Hey Black Guardian! This is a great bio, but there are a few things that need to be clarified first. From what I understand, Blackshadow is a Geoffroy's cat hybrid, correct? If this is the case, his brother can not be Duskfire, because Duskfire is a full Siberian cat. Unless their mother had kits before she had Blackshadow. Oh - And cats can not have black eyes, the closest color to that is grey. ^^
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Post by theblackguardian on Oct 9, 2010 17:50:51 GMT -5
Ok, the brother thing was Fable's Idea , i'll change my eyes to emerald green
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Post by Fluff on Oct 9, 2010 19:34:05 GMT -5
Okay. It looks great! ^^ Just remember that he isn't a full Geoffroy's cat. He is only 50% Geoffroy's cat. :3
Accepted!
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