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Post by Creepeh! on Jul 8, 2010 17:11:47 GMT -5
Of course, you haven't fully joined until you've made a cat.
Correct? I believe so.
So, I think we should shove the sentence minimuns down a bit.
Because I can make a sentence Five times better when I make a longer, jucier sentence.
With meat.
I.e: "Kassena loves salty things. This is why She loves to eat meat." Could be changed into: "Kassena loves salty things, hence why she loves meat like a mothers milk."
But in order to do that, without the rest of the sentences being bland, we would need a smaller sentence minimum. That way it wouldn't turn out like:
Kassena loves salty things, hence why she loves meat like a mothers milk. She rarely eats anything else. She doesn't like mice though. She relies on voles, rabbit and catnip. Catnip is hard to findso she rlies mostly on voles.
Could be, with a lower sentence minimum: Kassena loves salty things, hence why she loves meat like a mothers milk. Although she doesn't like many types of meat, she does like rabbit, voles, and catnip most of all. Catnip is very hard to find, so Kassena relies mostly on voles.
The good one is 2 sentences, in personality. The other one stinks, although it meets the requirments. And from that 2 sentences I wrote, it would cover quite a bit.
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