fable35
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"Good to see Colfer is pestering someone else"- Artemis Fowl II, praise for Halfmoon Investigations
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Post by fable35 on Sept 22, 2010 5:47:29 GMT -5
Character's Name:Duskfire Character's Age:17 moons Gender:Tom Alliance:Loner Position:Loner Breed and Species:Domestic Siberean Cat Appearance:Mid Gold eyes,Grey with a white belly,white socks on front paws and white Hind legs Personality:Shy, Independant and in-your-face,if you dont know him. When (and if) he warms up to you, He's Nice kind and caring although still a little sharp. Around kits he becomes Silent,unpredictable and even Dangerous. History:He was a kitypet to some old Twolegs, until they died. Then he started to wander the forest as a loner,rarely meeting others.He lost his parents when he was a kit so hates kits themselves(which will change).He changed His name To Duskfire after Hearing that his parents died in a fire and there were forest cats with two-piece names. (his original name was Dusk) Roleplay Sample: Nelson sat on the Fence, listening to one of Smudge's his old friend's, Firestar, adventures. "... He and Greystripe helped WindClan when they where driven out of their territory..." Smudge rambled on. Nelson knew this was a bunch of balony, but when he looked where the forest used to be, he shuddered. Comments/other?: where is IceClan's territory?
Edit: how is that?
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Post by Fluff on Sept 22, 2010 17:03:25 GMT -5
Welcome to the site, Fable! *again* This bio is great, but there are a few things that need to be cleared up before it can be accepted. Is Duskfire a kittypet or a loner? Because he can't be both. Also, this RPG is AU, so characters wouldn't even know about Firestar. That means that everything that happened in the book did not occur here. The very last thing is that the personality section needs just []one[/i] more sentence! And to answer your question, IceClan's territory is on a snowy mountain, the Tribe members sleep under an outcrop of rock. If you have any questions, you can message me or post it here.^-^
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fable35
Gettin' There
[M:842]
"Good to see Colfer is pestering someone else"- Artemis Fowl II, praise for Halfmoon Investigations
Posts: 24
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Post by fable35 on Sept 22, 2010 19:17:02 GMT -5
Thank you, I edited it. And one more thing, How do you get fresh kill?
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Post by Fluff on Sept 23, 2010 9:27:05 GMT -5
You earn freshkill by posting. Every time you post (in the actual RPG section), you earn 4 freshkill. It looks wonderful. Accepted.
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